07 March 2008 @ 10:40 pm
A pound of flesh. [Ookiku Furikabutte]  
And now for moar Oofuri~ I've got some ideas for random crack and pr0nnage, but this will have to do for now. o_o

    NOTES & WHATNOT:
  • Ookiku Furikabutte and all characters therein are certainly not mine. Also, the title of this piece was taken for the [info]31_days theme for February 11, 2007. One theme a day keeps writer's block away~ ♥
  • Written for a prompt from [info]lonelybusiness: “hyperventilating on a red light”. I originally intended this to be for ANOTHER pairing and for it to be happier, but then this came along and demanded to be written. @_@






Ookiku Furikabutte. A pound of flesh.




Ever since their practice game with Nishiura, “team training” had turned into a more politically correct way of saying “Squat at fourth base, keep your mitt up and prepare to be Kanou’s talking but otherwise unimportant and uninteresting target as Kanou pitched himself dead for the day”. What distressed Hatake was that he and Oda seemed to be the only ones who cared enough to worry about their team’s pitcher, but he figured that he shouldn’t have been very surprised — everyone else could not understand why Kanou was suddenly so hostile. It wasn’t that he openly hated them; it was that he had put some sort of barrier up between himself and their group, and he only connected with them when they needed to work as a team. He stopped joining them for meals, for arcade trips, for study groups. He only spoke when spoken to, and kept conversations brief and impersonal.

It might have been a wise decision to leave matters up to Oda, but since Hatake was not very comfortable with that, Mihoshi’s catcher eventually attempted to take matters into his own hands.

“You know, Kanou… um.”

“What?”

Hatake paused; something in his pitcher’s tone had made him lose the words. They were practicing throws and signals while the rest of the team ran other drills around them, but it felt like they were alone on the field — or more like, Hatake felt like he was alone on the field, with nothing but the sound and force of Kanou’s pitch.

“Er. Try your curve ball.”

“Okay. So what is it?” Kanou ventured, after he had tossed. “You sound like you have something to tell me.”

“I-it’s nothing important, really, I just thought… well, I mean, you’ve been kinda, uh, distant and stuff… so. Um.”

Kanou paused. Hatake almost lowered his mitt, but then thought better of it. Kanou’s lips pursed. The next pitch that he threw had a bit more force than usual. “I’ve got a lot on my mind,” was all he offered, and the last thing he said to Hatake for the day.

“Did you piss him off somehow?” Oda would ask of Hatake the following afternoon, over lunch. “I mean, I’m not blaming you or anything. I’m just asking.”

“I think I did.”

“Heh, all right. Thinking usually means doing, with Kanou. So, how do you think it happened?”

Hatake didn’t answer. He muttered something about cramming for next period and went off to finish his sandwich in another place, alone.
 
 
Current Location: in the bedroom, yep.
Current Mood: content
Current Music: Chemical Brothers - "Block Rockin' Beats"
 
 
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baby, you're my forever girl: » hamaizu: ouran cosplay。[info]ficcentricity on March 7th, 2008 03:15 pm (UTC)
Oh, Hatake. :/ You made me sympathize with him here, which is surprising, considering that I, uh, usually dislike him intensely.
...with a pen in hand.[info]stitchedophelia on March 7th, 2008 03:26 pm (UTC)
...Ahaha. I actually don't like him either. But yeah. The fic demanded to be written. o_o
Profiterole: Rin - Sou and Katsura[info]_profiterole_ on March 7th, 2008 03:18 pm (UTC)
I don't remember which one is Hatake *fails* but that was a very nice fic. ^__^
...with a pen in hand.: writer[info]stitchedophelia on March 7th, 2008 03:27 pm (UTC)
Mwehehe. Hatake's the meanie catcher that bullied Mihashi before Nishiura's game with Mihoshi.

Thanks for reading! ♥
Profiterole: Prince of Tennis - Ohtori and Shishido[info]_profiterole_ on March 7th, 2008 03:34 pm (UTC)
Okay, thanks. ^^
Statuess (AKA Rin): Elle pout[info]statuess on March 7th, 2008 07:39 pm (UTC)
You missed out "... And really, really wants to get inside Kanou's special place."
...with a pen in hand.: debauchery[info]stitchedophelia on March 8th, 2008 01:30 am (UTC)
LOL. Omg, truth. XD
.Yukeh. ( ̄‿ ̄)ノ: <3[info]yukitsu on March 7th, 2008 03:21 pm (UTC)
Hatake~~~ EVEN IF YOU WERE AN ASS, I LIKE YOU. BECAUSE YOU GOT DUMPED.

...with a pen in hand.: crack[info]stitchedophelia on March 7th, 2008 03:27 pm (UTC)
...Is it also because he's your uterus?
.Yukeh. ( ̄‿ ̄)ノ: :<[info]yukitsu on March 7th, 2008 03:34 pm (UTC)
AHUAHUAHUAHUAHUA. NO. I do like him!
...with a pen in hand.[info]stitchedophelia on March 7th, 2008 03:37 pm (UTC)
Underdog, FTW! X3
a beard mightier than ostia itself!: i love you thiiiis much[info]hezul on March 7th, 2008 07:38 pm (UTC)
IT ALWAYS MAKES ME GLAD TO KNOW I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE.
...with a pen in hand.: crack[info]stitchedophelia on March 8th, 2008 01:31 am (UTC)
YOU ARE NOT ALONE, COMRADE.
.Yukeh. ( ̄‿ ̄)ノ: Braindeath[info]yukitsu on March 8th, 2008 03:25 pm (UTC)
OUR ICONS MATCH.
Walter and the Benjamins: determined![info]lonelybusiness on March 7th, 2008 03:42 pm (UTC)
I'm feeling sympathy for Hatake. :(( It's a strange and uncomfortable feeling. :((

Seriously though, I'm kind of elated about the kind of fics you've been writing for my prompts. It makes me feel like I've done something worthwhile. Except not really, but anyway, I feel good. \(^_^)/
...with a pen in hand.: writer[info]stitchedophelia on March 8th, 2008 01:37 am (UTC)
Hon, you can give me prompts any time~ ♥
a beard mightier than ostia itself!: i love you thiiiis much[info]hezul on March 7th, 2008 07:39 pm (UTC)
A fic that acknowledges Hatake's existence and actually makes him likable?

On my internets?

THANK YOU. :D
...with a pen in hand.: stitched[info]stitchedophelia on March 8th, 2008 01:35 am (UTC)
Ahurhur. You're most welcome~
Pearl: D8[info]beteio on March 7th, 2008 08:21 pm (UTC)
Yay for Kanou love ^^ And you've got me feeling bad for Hatake, which... has never happened before.
...with a pen in hand.: shoot to kill[info]stitchedophelia on March 8th, 2008 01:36 am (UTC)
Lulz. I remember thinking "WHO IS THIS ASSHOLE?" the first time he came out, but then when I saw what happened later... well, it's kinda hard not to feel just a little bad for him. Even though he did get what he deserved. >_>;
YunYun: oofuri//kanou[info]yuna_tulin on March 7th, 2008 11:20 pm (UTC)
NO YOURE NOT GOING TO GET ME TO LIKE HATAKE. LULZ
This was really good!! And considering I agree with the fact that Mihoshi needs moar lovin and totally obssess over Kanou ;3;;
Thank you for writing this!♥
...with a pen in hand.: deviant[info]stitchedophelia on March 8th, 2008 01:36 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading! :3

I do solemnly swear to try Oda/Kanou pr0n next.
since feeling is first: ryohei // know the signs.[info]afterthefray on March 8th, 2008 12:28 am (UTC)
Your fic actually made me... feel soft for Hatake. Urgh, I usually hate him immensely.

But! Kanou! I love this side of him, truly, I do.
...with a pen in hand.: elegance[info]stitchedophelia on March 8th, 2008 01:37 am (UTC)
Well, that's the point of fanfiction sometimes, right? To make you think and feel. :o

Kanou's a porn star. Ahurhur.
Lynlyn[info]kye_kestrel on March 10th, 2008 12:33 pm (UTC)
... Why am I suddenly getting a mental image of all the series' catchers commiserating about each other's bitchy/wimpy/delicate pitchers over protein drinks?
...with a pen in hand.: crack[info]stitchedophelia on March 10th, 2008 01:15 pm (UTC)
....You know? That works. o_o